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war games chapter 2 (reunion)

Posted by idolred588 Dec. 25, 2009 @ 10:06 PM EST

Chapter 2

The night I landed was dark enough that I could barely see my own hand in front of my face. My eyes had not yet adjusted to the darkness so seeing where I was going was near impossible. My mission was to meet up with my squad at a church not too far from where I landed. I walked through the woods with the only sounds of anti aircraft fire in the distance. Once my eyes adjusted I could see that I was in a forest with tall trees and bushes and shrubs scattered around. There was a rustle in the bush followed by a shadowy figure leaping out of the bushes and tackling me. He yelled "See you in hell Nazi bastard!" and raised a knife with the intention of cutting my throat. I said "I'm not a Nazi." and punched the man. He said "Miller? Is that you? I should have known right away from that punch you hit like a baby girl." it was Pvt. John Reilly one of my squad members. I said "You need to be quiet, there are Nazi troops everywhere."

He pointed me towards the church where we would rendezvous with the rest of our squad. I knew Pvt. Reilly at boot camp where we became friends. He was always a joker which made him a lot of friends, except for the officers and drill sergeants of training camp. He could make light of almost any situation. Even on the plane ride while shells were just narrowly missing our plane and we all were lost with fear he was talking about tickets to a Yankee game he had to miss because of his recruitment. Some could call it a skill that the war does not affect him psychologically but if you don't take it seriously and let you mind wander you could end up with a bullet through your brains.

In the distance we spotted the church but as we drew closer we say four people inside. They were not one of our friends but a Nazi patrol instead. We leaned up against the wall and Reilly threw a grenade in the door. There were panicked shouts followed by a deafening explosion. Apon entering the church there were four dead bodies and blood splattered against the wall. Pvt. Reilly collected medals off the uniforms of the soldiers explaining that he would hang them up one he got home as a reminder of what he went through and why he joined the war in the first place. He had a much easier time killing Nazis because he was Jewish. Although he wouldn't dare wear a star of David in case he was captured to avoid merciless torture and eventually execution at the hands of Nazis. The church was just an old stone building that was half destroyed because of a German shell.

Then all of a sudden a familiar voice called from behind us. It was Sgt. Patterson and with him was Pvt. Jackson. I asked if there were any more of us and he said "no they're all dead. All but us"

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war games chapter one (shot down and alone)

Posted by idolred588 Dec. 18, 2009 @ 3:09 PM EST

War games chapter one

Due to the complaints about how I narrated the intro I have decided to put the rest of the story in 1st person. Enjoy!

Its been 2 months since I left home to join the army and about 2 hours since the completion of my training. I was given a uniform complete with an m1 garand and a colt pistol a knife and frag grenades. When I was handed these things I realized what I had gotten myself into. A few days later me and the rest of my squad got into a plane to travel to France where we would jump.

As we drew near the drop point deafening explosions sounded all around us. We had all been prepared to jump but none of us were prepared for what we saw. Our sergeant's name was Patterson, he stood up and yelled "Hooks up!" we all simultaneously put our hooks on the wire over head. He said "when that light turns green you will all jump from the plane and we'll meet at the bottom" I started to sweat as I looked at the red light hoping it would never turn. Because I knew that as soon as I jumped from the plane chances were slim id touch ground alive. The light turned green and one by one we leaped from the plane.

When I jumped and started to fall I was so scared stiff I almost didn't pull the string to open my parachute in time. I watched an anti aircraft gun blow up my plane and kill nearly half of my squad. I stared as it emotionally numbed me. My friends were on that plane, people I had gotten to know and like. Now they were dead before they even got out of the plane. As I slowly floated down I watched other men being shot down attached to their parachutes. When you seen a man die right before your eyes it changes you. It makes you see the world as it really is.

Then finally I touched ground. I was hanging from a tree and I could slowly feel the strings on my parachute stretch then snap, Then darkness. When I awoke I found myself in the woods with no one around and nothing but the soft sounds of the anti aircraft explosions far overhead. The impact made me forget where I was for a moment but I was quickly reminded. I grabbed my gun and pressed onward. I had to find the rest of my squad, if there are any left. While walking I heard voices, I couldn't understand them so I could only assume they were German. Two Nazi soldiers walked past me as I hid behind a bush. I waited till their backs were to me then I slowly rose from my hiding place and shot the two men. I stared at them thinking about what I had just done but I remembered they would had done the same if the saw me.

When you're alone all you can do is think. So many thoughts were racing through my mind at once. Where am I? where is the rest of my squad? Are they even alive? Anyone who's ever been in a war will tell you that once you kill someone you will never be the same. They're right.

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war games introduction (chapter 0)

Posted by idolred588 Dec. 17, 2009 @ 3:17 PM EST

this is an introduction/prologue to my new story war games. please tell me what you think and remember im new at this so dont be to harsh.

Let me tell you about earth in a state you know all to well, A state of war. Men and women fighting and dying for their country. Fighting for faceless politicians and generals who put them in harms war for their glorious campaign's. this is a time period when citizens of the us at least in some places thought their army was invincible from never losing a war. This is about the greatest conflict we as humans has ever created world war 2. I could get into detail about different opinions of war from different groups of people and generals and battle plans but this is not a history textbook. This is a story about a man who enlisted, well you could barely call him a man because he was hardly 18. His name was Thomas miller. Thomas was born and raised in new York city and after the Japanese bombing of pearl harbor the army was looking for new recruits to fight overseas.
Thomas was a tall man with brown hair and brown eyes. He was 18 years old and just out of school. After he heard about the bombing of pearl harbor over the radio and news papers he decided to enlist in the armed forces to serve his country. He went down to the recruitment center and was surprised to see hundreds of other men lined up to join the army, navy, and marines. He got to talking with some of the other men and he became friends with some of them. When it was his turn he went into a room for a medical examination where he was asked several questions and tested in the standard medical procedures much like a trip to the doctor. At the end of the test he was told that he would be sent to a training base in Georgia and would be a part of the 101st infantry unit. He went home to tell his parents the news and his father was extremely proud of him.

Father: son I can not express in words how proud I am of you. It takes a true man to carry a gun for his country and the flag he salutes.
His mother on the other hand had different feelings. She was silent for a moment and then started to cry. Thomas reassured his mother that he would be ok and that theres was no need to worry. and the next morning he took the 10:00 train to Georgia.

This chapter was to get to know the main character and give a brief summary of what the story was about. The other chapters will probably be much longer and defiantly more exiting. - idolred

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making a war story on my blog

Posted by idolred588 Dec. 16, 2009 @ 9:03 PM EST

after almost 2 years im finally contributing something to newgrounds. i dont have the nessacary tools to make flash yet so im making a story on my NG blog. the story will be about an american soldier in world war 2. i dont know how good it will be scince ive never done this sort of thing before i hope you will enjoy it. i have decided to call it war games (no theres no relation to the 1983 movie of the same name) i hope you enjoy it

-idol red

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ghosts as talked about by idolred

Posted by idolred588 Dec. 11, 2009 @ 8:06 PM EST

well its been about a week scince i posted the 2012 message on my page. 2 people commented which is more than usual. and bieng the supersticious bastard that i am i have to put more useless info about supernatural and strange stuff that you probably wont even listen to. i want to beat my record of 2 diffrent people posting comments so if you read this tell someone else to read it too. so ill be talking about ghosts.

this will be about videos ive seen stories ive read what people i know have told me and even my own personal experiences with ghosts. i belive in ghosts and wether you do or not is based strongly on opinion. so ghosts spirits spectors ghouls whatever you want to call them are belived to be people who have died who had not been punished to hell and could not find the light of heaven as some would call it. point is there are many diffrent kinds of ghosts so here is the list of all that i am aware of

1. spirit orbs
these are the kinds of ghost that are best described as a bright light shaped as a circle floating in midair. not much else to say. they are supposed to be the very essence of a persons spirit or a soul.

2. invisible ghosts
these are the kinds of ghosts that as you probably figured out you can not see. they are the kinds most commonly associated with poultergists (a poultergist is a temporary haunting) the kinds that move chairs or throw things across the room and other stuff like that.

3. shadow ghosts
known as evil spirits these ghosts only appear in shadow form. some belive they are the kind that haunt houses after they die and sometimes even seek vengence on people by haunting them. these ghosts are known as evil spirits and are sometimes more often then not shown in scary movies.

4. normal ghosts
these are the final ghosts i will talk about. they are the kind who come back in the form of who they were when they were alive. these are the ghosts ive heard about most.

now that ive told you the general idea about what ghosts are and told you the diffrent kinds. this is my experience with ghosts. this is my ghost story, what im about to tell you is true and really did happen to me.

i was 13 and visiting my cousins in massachusets. they didnt have enough room for my family at thier house so we rented some old cabin. every morning when i woke up i saw a shadow shaped like a person standing in the same place in the corner of my eye. if i tried to look directly at it the shadow would disapeer. i thought it was a shadow ghost but wasnt convinced 2 weeks after i got back home in new york i told my mom what had happened and the creepy part that left me speechless. she told me my little sister had told her the exact same thing.

i have a youtube video if your intrested. its called ghosts spirits and demons. some of its crap but there are some pretty cool clips. there are actually 4 in the series so if you get a chance check it out.

thats everything i know about ghosts or at least what i can think of at the moment. i have one favor to ask you all. if you have a ghost experience or would like to share something about ghosts talk about it in the comments. or if by some chance you would like to talk to me about ghosts or 2012 or aliens or any of the supersticious stuff my aim username is idolred588. im a very lonely person and could use the company (jk)

see you later this is idolred

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2012 as talked about by idolred

Posted by idolred588 Nov. 11, 2009 @ 9:28 PM EST

its november and the new movie 2012 comes out on friday. now im not going to review this movie because that is not the purpose of this message (the fact that it hasnt come out yet helps too) no, im going to talk about the 2012 apocolypse. alot of people i know have talked about this. this whole thing started because the mayan calander ends on december 21 2012 and that started the idea that the world will end on that date. they also made similar claimes about Y2K and june 6 2006. get it 666? whatever. whether you belive its true or not is all based on opinion. i am extremely supersticious so i do. but i still know most likely it will not happen. i just want you all to think about what would happen if it did. the movie commercials i have seen shows giant tsunamis massive earthquakes and more. and if it does happen we can only help but wonder could the slim one in a million chance that one of us could be one of the lone survivors who have the earth to themselvs. will there be any survivors at all. another thing i have heard is that crystal skulls much like in indiana jones 4 are scattered across the earth and if placed in the correct locations can prevent the apocolypse. but i think thats a load of bullshit. and when we die what will happpen to us. will we go to heaven or more likely hell or will our spirits inhabit the earth we loved when alive. so i have some advice for you all. live your life to its fullest. do everything you want to and can because you never know whether or not the world will be destroyed before our very eyes in 2012. will the world end in 2012 or even in our lifetime? if it does how will it happen? will you be one of the lone survivors? will there be any survivors at all? i dont know and niether does anyone else. just in case try to be happy in your life dont work to hard and try to do the things you want because you never know when your life and everyone around you will end.

goodbye have a nice day and tell other people about this video. i want as many people as possible to see this.

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baaaaaaad movie

Posted by idolred588 Oct. 20, 2009 @ 7:18 PM EDT

hey to all the people who commented on my superjail message *all one of you* (thanks soulmaster71) and to all the people who may have seen it you know i talked about a show i really liked and told you to watch it. but now im going to tell you about a movie i saw recently that really sucked. this movie is a horror movie called mr jingles. ill tell you about it and why it should be burned than have its ashes be sucked up in a vaccume and have the vaccume be blown up. but first if you read this review please comment !!! i want to know if im any good at this so i know if i should make more. if you hate it ill probably make more anyway cause i dont like you :D

so this movie is about a murderer dressed as a clown called mr jingles. the clown looks like a mix between ronald mcdonald and the clown from it. the clown it turns out was trying to save the kid (even though you clearly saw him carrying axes) i dont know mabye hes a lumberjack clown. the clown is shot and killed (THANK GOD). but he comes back to life and gets revenge by killing and chopping to pieces people who have done him wrong and anyone who happens to be with them with his toy axes of doom (do you think he does birthdays?) oh and by the way the blood looks like cherry kool aid CHERRY F**KING KOOL AID. so several murders and gushing of shugery fruit punch the clown dies and the movie ends. and ive seen better acting by pet rocks. anyway the movie ends the clown dies and me and im sure many people wasted an hour and a half of thier lives.

again PLEASE COMMENT i want to know what you think. please dont see this movie it deserves to be burnt have its ashes.......oh i already said that. ok good bye tell me what you think have a nice day. this is a movie review from the superjail guy

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SUPERJAIL

Posted by idolred588 Oct. 19, 2009 @ 6:19 PM EDT

listen everyone who goes on to my profile (and i know thats not many people) i have to tell you all about this great show called superjail. it is AWESOME. some shows use violence to be funny but superjail takes that and multiplies it by 1000. its gross violent offensive and hillarious. if you listen to my message you can watch superjail on channel 32 at 11:15 every friday night. or if you want to watch it right now go to www. adultswim.com and search superjail. youll love it and if you dont like it you dont deserve to be alive and have no taste in tv shows.
http://www.adultswim.com/shows/superja il/index.html

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